Thread:A Bystander/@comment-10073844-20160326073910/@comment-27448112-20160326145531

Okay... I'm back. :D

Overall, the guide is perfect! I like it! However, I would like to add and change some bits in the guide, as well as some concerns and sentiments.

I like how you used Etihw as the sample portrait. I like them <3

Also, apologies for the huge text wall :o

1.1 Header Quote
 * Can the template be added via classic and new Visual Editor? If not then I'd suggest putting the code for the template, which is...

1.7 Appearances
 * Uh... I think Major, Minor, and Cameo should be under Header 2's, not 3's? Appearances would be Header 1. So I would assume that the three should be Header 2's.

1.8 Relationships
 * Same concern with (Series) characters being in Header 2.

1.10 Gallery
 * Nothing much about here. I might consider adding allowed images in the future.

2 Guide to Grammar and Terms
 * I'd suggest that we should add another section here: 2.6 Naming a Series
 * In naming a series, always italicize it. This is observing correct grammar. (I forgot where I read this so I can't give reference to this)
 * E.g:
 * Yonaka Kurai (倉井 ヨナカ) is a high school girl and the protagonist of Mogeko Castle. - Wrong
 * Yonaka Kurai (倉井 ヨナカ) is a high school girl and the protagonist of Mogeko Castle. - Right

2.3c Faulty Parallelism
 * It would be best to let the definition of faulty parallelism go first before the given example.

2.4 Dangling and Misplaced Modifiers
 * No major concerns here. There's just a missing "It" in the two definitions. So yeah...

3.1 Internal Links and 3.2 External Links
 * Should we add source codes for these?

3.3 Splitting Links
 * Mind if you give an example? I cannot fully decipher it XP

3.8 References
 * I have observed that you used parentheses as alternatives. There's a neater way to do this: The  and   tags!
 * The  and   tags are used to disable MediaWiki parsing. In other words, it's to disable using features such as internal links.
 * For example, having      outputs Shrimp instead of Shrimp.
 * Going back to the topic, I can type in the codes properly without any substitutions. Here are neater versions of the codes in the Manual:

or

First format:

Second format:

That was fun. These are all the things I have observed.

Don't worry. I'll help 'ya setting this up. :)