Thread:Saveyukisada/@comment-27840438-20161213000025/@comment-28097343-20161213005928

Oh, did you do the Personality section, Yuki? If that's the case, then it's a job well done, if I do say so myself. There aren't any grammatical or punctuation errors, and it's paced very nicely.

You'll need to polish up the Relationships section, though. You've made a few punctuation mistakes, dear.

Once those are corrected, it will be great. The other sections will need to be updated, but we can do that in a later date.

Ah, and a little tip: When denoting a quotation in writing, be sure to use quotation marks ("").

An example: Justim has been described as "all flowers" by Deep Sea Prisoner.